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Thursday, 9 March 2017

Story about Ruin



Ruin

In an old dirty bushy  trashed city. I was trying to find information. I was built to find the glass of HAVEN Nano-systems, in that strange island. I found a big old  metal box in a building called HAVEN Nano-systems. I dropped the metal box from the 87th floor and watched it fall down. I went downstairs to the box. I kicked the box  and it opened I found something really similar to a phone but it was just a glass screen. I used my hand to turn the glass on, it was the glass that I was looking for!

Suddenly the sound of a helicopter came it was a giant air ship, it was going to  try to steal the glass. I saw my motor bike so I slide down a dark bushy tunnel and hopped on my motorbike. When I got on the motorbike the airship  dropped a small robot. It chased after me. Soon I saw a sign it said  tunnel no trucks. I went into the tunnel then the robots started to shoot purple lasers. When I was nearly at the end of the tunnel I picked up my bomb and I banged it on my motor bike. At the end of the tunnel I threw the bomb to the top of me and it got stuck on the tunnel. The bomb exploded when the robots were at the end of the tunnel !   

The Giant airship went past me, it was trying to kill me but they couldn't kill me because I am a robot. They knew that I had the glass screen I took my special weapon out and I connected my electronic power to the weapon. I jumped out of the motorbike as I hit the airship really hard and I kept on pushing the weapon into the air ship! Suddenly the airship exploded!

The End!



This week for writing, we have been watching a video called Ruin and we have 
been making it into a story.

This made feel really confident with watching a video and writing about it.


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